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Uni
Jun 12, 2006 20:08:52 GMT
Post by Ceri on Jun 12, 2006 20:08:52 GMT
Huh? What happened there?
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Uni
Jun 12, 2006 20:31:41 GMT
Post by Phoenix on Jun 12, 2006 20:31:41 GMT
[glow=red,2,300] well, it got a bit confusing so my thread could go after Dominique meets the guy who owns the house and nathan collapses on the sofa.....so basically, the guy gave dominique more drink, then nathan comes and collapses, then david comes and helps dominique outside, and then they meet jenny [/glow]
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Uni
Jun 12, 2006 20:39:45 GMT
Post by Ceri on Jun 12, 2006 20:39:45 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]Ahh okay, my bad...sorry about that. Right, take it from outside with Jenny[/glow]
"Are you okay?" David asked. Dominique nodded, took a step away from the car and collapsed into Jenny's arms. "No," the murmered. "Maybe we should get her home," Jenny said, alarmed. "Where do you live, Dominique?" "She lives opposite me," David said. Jenny wasn't listening. "Dominique...Dominique!" She shook her, but Dominique was unconscious. "What're we gonna do?" Jenny asked. "Get her into the car," David suggested, "or she'll get too cold. Should I phone for an ambulance?"
[glow=red,2,300]EDIT: Nathan changed to David...[/glow]
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Uni
Jun 12, 2006 20:54:44 GMT
Post by Phoenix on Jun 12, 2006 20:54:44 GMT
"Definitely"Jenny nodded. She opened her car door and gently let Dominique lie down in the back seats. As soon as she closed the door to keep the cold air out, she heard her vomit again. Jenny winced. "That was a brand new car..." she said quietly. David got his phone out and called for an ambulance.
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Dominique woke up, and realised she was in hospital. She felt much better, though she couldn't remember much from the night of the party. She saw David standing just outside the ward, and waved to him. He came in. "What happened?" she asked "Well," David thought, "Let's just say never drink again" "Oh no! What have I done?" "Jenny's car is being cleaned, and you've been sleeping here for 2 days" Dominique suddenly sat up. "2 DAYS?!?!" she gasped.
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Uni
Jun 12, 2006 21:08:14 GMT
Post by Ceri on Jun 12, 2006 21:08:14 GMT
Dominique groaned. "Ahh, I'm going to kill Gemma. Oh, David, I'll never drink again. Jenny's new car...where is she? I have to apologise...and you had to get me here...Oh, I'm so sorry, David..." "Relax," David said, slightly alarmed. "The ambulance fellows got you here, not me. Jenny's car will be fine, I'm sure." "Thank you for phoning them, David," she said, sinking back in the bed. "Oh, I've caused such a fuss...Jenny's poor car...And I'll have missed lectures and you will, as well, and poor Jenny..." "Take it easy," David said. "Don't worry about it. We can catch up on lectures and the car will survive. As for phoning the ambulance, anyone would have done the same for me. Look, I'll get into trouble for disturbing you if I stay here. If anyone asks I didn't wake you up, okay?" He flashed her a smile. "I'll be back later." Dominique watched him leave, overwhelmed with tiredness and regret and a strange, warm feeling that had washed over her when she had seen David...
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Uni
Jun 12, 2006 22:06:04 GMT
Post by Aulius on Jun 12, 2006 22:06:04 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]Dominique lives opposite DAVID. Nathan lives on campus. Thought I should mention that. [/glow]
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 7:44:08 GMT
Post by Ceri on Jun 13, 2006 7:44:08 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]Oooops Sorry about that. I'll change it...[/glow]
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 12:17:26 GMT
Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 12:17:26 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]lol easy mistake to make cez[/glow]
meanwhile in a leisure centre gymnasium near the university Gemma was just finishing off practising a very different floor routine to the one she'd been doing the other night. She still couldn't help the overwhelming feeling of guilt about Dominique being hospitalised after that party but she had to laugh at it all. She laughed as she wondered to herself if Dominique would come to the follow up party in a fortnights time.
back at the hospital
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 13:13:42 GMT
Post by Phoenix on Jun 13, 2006 13:13:42 GMT
Dominique saw a nurse come, and remembering what David had said, she quickly closed her eyes and pretended to be asleep. The bed was quite soft and cosy, she had a TV right in front of her, the nurses would bring her food, she didn't have to worry about the washing up etc. Dominique sighed. I can get used to this treatment, she thought, but remembering the night of the party, she quickly changed her mind.
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Gemma picked up her bottle of water and wiped her neck with a towel. Suddenly she got a flash back. She was at the party, and Jon, the guy who owned the house, was standing in front of her, laughing. She shook her head. That was not a flash back, because she didn't remember that happening. But it felt like a flash back, and it felt like it really did happen...
[glow=red,2,300] that meaning her drink got spiked?[/glow]
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 13:25:33 GMT
Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 13:25:33 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]i guessed so much[/glow]
she shook her head to clear it of the image. suddenly feeling a bit light-headed herself. why was this happening to her? sureley she couldn't still be hungover, the party was like two days ago! but it wasn't like her to forget. she usually remembered everything that had happened when she was drunk, and those memories often drew blushes
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 13:29:41 GMT
Post by Phoenix on Jun 13, 2006 13:29:41 GMT
Jon knocked on Nathan's door, and he let Jon in. "Why are you looking so happy?" Nathan asked "Had a great party" "Didn't everyone" "Yeah...but!" Jon gave a signal for Nathan to come nearer, and looked around to make sure no one was listening. "What?" Nathan asked, eager to know what Jon is smirking about. "I spiked Gem's drink" Nathan's smile faded. "Gemma?" "Yes" "You spiked her drink...." Nathan stood up, silent. Then without a warning he clenched his fist and punched Jon in the face. Jon collapsed onto the floor and spat out a tooth covered in blood. "WHAT ELSE DID YOU DO TO HER?!?!" Nathan screamed and starting beating him up.
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 13:32:27 GMT
Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 13:32:27 GMT
"ow, nothing much" Jon tried to fight the other guy off "WHAT ELSE DID YOU DO TO HER?!!" repeated Nathan "look it was just a bit of fun" snarled Jon "nothing to get pissed off about" "what?!!" snapped natan raising his fist to hit him again
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 13:37:38 GMT
Post by Phoenix on Jun 13, 2006 13:37:38 GMT
Jon managed to escape and grabbed a coke can before turning round and aiming at Nathan's head. He threw the can, Nathan ducked, and just then Professor Alberts opened the door and walked in, ready to tell whoever was inside to keep the noise down. THe can hit Alberts on the head, and a fountain of coca cola started fizzing down his cheeks.
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 13:46:35 GMT
Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 13:46:35 GMT
Alberts gave Jon a look of pure annoyance and opened his mout the reprimand him. but nathan beat him to it "i'm going to kill you if you've done anything to her!!" screamed Nathan
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 15:01:53 GMT
Post by Stanic on Jun 13, 2006 15:01:53 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]hmmmm i sense some thing going on between Nathan and Gemma[/glow]
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 15:06:29 GMT
Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 15:06:29 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]or is it just friendship[/glow]
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 15:07:09 GMT
Post by Aulius on Jun 13, 2006 15:07:09 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]"Good Friends"?[/glow]
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 15:07:44 GMT
Post by Stanic on Jun 13, 2006 15:07:44 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]dunno. leave it to someones imagination[/glow]
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 15:09:05 GMT
Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 15:09:05 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]someone post on the story[/glow]
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 16:24:30 GMT
Post by Phoenix on Jun 13, 2006 16:24:30 GMT
"You two!!" Alberts bellowed. "Break it up!!" A small crowd was gathering outside the door. Sabien saw what was going on and pushed his way in. "Hey! Guys!" he shouted, and stood between Nathan and Jon. Alberts grabbed Jon and Sabien held Nathan's wrists firmly. "Right." Alberts said "You two, in my office, NOW!"
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 16:52:11 GMT
Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 16:52:11 GMT
they had to walk through the gathered chattering crowds of students risen from their rooms to find out what the fight was about. some cheered and patted them on the back as they went past, Jon looked totally stoked by the whole experience
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 16:55:31 GMT
Post by Phoenix on Jun 13, 2006 16:55:31 GMT
David returned to Uni and saw the crowd outside Nathan's door. "Another party?" he said "No" sabien replied "Big fight - Jon and Nathan" "Why? and who won?" "No idea, and I think Professor Alberts won"
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Back in the hospital, Gemma came to visit Domonique. She took a deep breath. Her apology was already planned and memorised.
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 16:57:24 GMT
Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 16:57:24 GMT
she opened the door slowly and saw Dominique sitting up hapilly on the bed reading some subject nottes procured for here by David "hey 'Nique"
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 17:06:32 GMT
Post by Phoenix on Jun 13, 2006 17:06:32 GMT
Dominique looked up, and didn't reply. "I'm so sorry about the party." "You made me drink, and then you left me" "I said sorry" "Great friend you are" "Come on 'Nique" Gemma said "it was a party, and I wasn't being myself. You know, all the alcohol and stuff, I went slightly wild and...." "I could've died...." "Now thats a bit exaggerated" "I threw up all over someone's car, and then fainted" GEmma sighed "I am really sorry, and I promise I would never push you into doing anything ever again." Dominique was silent. "You could've said 'no' though" Gemma said.
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 17:13:08 GMT
Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 17:13:08 GMT
"you know i couldn't" said Dominique "you're so forceful sometimes Gem, you wouldn't have let me live it down if i'd said no, and i wanted to prove to you guys that i wasn't such a nerd, David said..." "oooh David" Gemma sat down on her bed with typical american bluntness "so you're into David then?"
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 18:41:54 GMT
Post by Aulius on Jun 13, 2006 18:41:54 GMT
"I never said that and...and" She started
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David waited in the next corridor from Alberts' office was. He could almost hear every word clearly. Not long after Nathan got sent out. Alberts could now be heard giving Jon an even louder shout. Nathan turned into the corridor David was waiting in. "What the holy mother of shiet was that about?" he said quietly to Nathan "Jon spiked Gemma's drink"
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Uni
Jun 13, 2006 20:25:15 GMT
Post by Phoenix on Jun 13, 2006 20:25:15 GMT
"That bastard" David muttered "I'll go and see Gemma, see if she's ok" "I'll come with you. I haven't got any lessons this afternoon" David said. "Know where Gemma is?" Nathan asked "No but I'm guessing she's in hospital apologising to Dominique. She's much better today" "You seem to pay her a lot of visits" Nathan grinned and gave him a friendly push on the shoulder. They saw Jenny walking out of a classroom. "Hey Jenny" david said "Oh hi! by the way I can get my car back tomorrow. Everything's ok" she said "That's good" "Is Dominique alright?" she asked "We're just about to go and see her" "Can I come too?" "Yeah of course"
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Uni
Jun 14, 2006 7:20:06 GMT
Post by Ceri on Jun 14, 2006 7:20:06 GMT
"...Oh come on," Gemma said. "You were all over him when I last saw you." "You last saw me at the party and you were as drunk as I was," Dominique replied. Gemma grinned guiltily. "Yeah, well. You mentioned David over the holidays. So," she added, nudging her. "Think he's hot?" "Give me a break..."
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Uni
Jun 14, 2006 9:31:20 GMT
Post by Phoenix on Jun 14, 2006 9:31:20 GMT
Just then, David Nathan and Jenny walked in. "Give you a break?" David said, having only heard the last sentence. Dominique blushed. "Err....." Gemma began. "We were talking about....the party!" Nathan paused. "Are you ok?" he asked Gemma. "Um...I think I am. Why?" she looked at NAthan. Should I tell her? he thought. Or can she live without knowing her drink got spiked? If I tell her she'll only get worried and angry...
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Uni
Jun 14, 2006 13:46:03 GMT
Post by Ceri on Jun 14, 2006 13:46:03 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]Suspenseful...[/glow]
"Jenny, I'm so sorry about your car," Dominique said miserably. "Don't worry about it," Jenny laughed. "Someone has to use car washes." Dominique smiled weakly. "Nathan, what's up?" Jenny added, looking at her.
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