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Post by Ceri on Oct 11, 2006 17:07:35 GMT
Topic for this contest is Character Intros. I'm about to post my own for those who are confused! Anyway, entries must be posted by Sunday, and polls will be open till Wednesday. Good luck, everyone!
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Post by Ceri on Oct 11, 2006 17:08:57 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]This is the intro to the origianal Chalerway Silversea from The Rise of Starlight:[/glow]
After a while, however, [Dathran] became aware that he wasn’t the only one sitting apart from the group. The Sorcerer, Chalerway, having made his introductions, was also keeping to himself; it was hard to tell if he was listening to the conversation or simply letting his mind wander. Dathran slowly looked the Sorcerer over. He was dressed in the same style as the Riverdale Chanters but in red and black; he looked younger than Leriage, though whether this was from the fact that he stood remarkably shorter than him or because of the lack of age in his handsome face and vividly green eyes Dathran couldn’t decide. He had dark, almost black hair at inconsistent length, falling just short of his shoulders at the back. There was something that Dathran felt he recognised in the Sorcerer. For some reason he reminded him of his brother.
When Dathran next looked up his eyes met those of the Sorcerer. Chalerway smiled in the shy kindness of a cautious but potential friend. Dathran sighed and half-heartedly smiled back, hoping to dispel any ideas of wanting to be engaged in conversation. It didn’t work. Chalerway had already stood up and moved towards him.
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Post by darkshadow on Oct 13, 2006 17:01:06 GMT
As they got nearer, the gate opened and a tall big built man came busily out of the castle, cheeks red with exertion and hands waving frantically. “Come, come you must be Aranel and Elessar right? I see Alzeon has done his job, well done Alzeon, now all three of you come in, it looks like its about to rain” Quickly the man ushered the three travellers inside as the first sound of thunder rippled throughout the city. “Ahh you were just in time!” the big man exclaimed. “This way, this way” waving them forward, the man continued on into a big entrance hall. Aranel looked this man up and down, Light brown hair, growing wispy now, as he got older. He was dressed in the latest fashion, a long sleeved tunic and cape, leggings with knee high boots, however they were not in the usual fashionable colours for a man of his importance, this man was wearing all black, in mourning for his king, Aranel thought, “This way” said the man again, hurriedly leading them out of the entrance hall and down one of the many corridors, it wasnt long before he lead the 3 companions off of the corridor into the great hall. “Wait here sirs, while I get your rooms ready for you, you’ll be staying here a couple of days before you go on your journey.” The man bustled off haughtily and Aranel and Elessar both turned to Alzeon “Who was that?” they said in unison
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Oct 13, 2006 17:58:10 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]I'm going to post my intro for my favorite character on comic if that's ok with everyone?[/glow]
Juliana was frustrated. Her modus operandi normally involved a gun, a well planned distraction and a very fast car. If that went wrong she always had he back up plan, unleash a can of flaming psychic whoop-ass on them. The sky above her head sparked like diamonds. The stars were very clear tonight she couldn’t help noticing. The do-gooders were just leaving the homeless shelter. She lurked in the shadows in the alleyway next to the building, totally unseen, ready to pounce
One of them came into her alley to smoke. Juliana was indignant, how dare he, what a filthy ungodly habit it was and how Juliana hated it. She had strangled him with invisible hands before he even fully realised she was there. She stepped back to admire her work. Juliana caught sight of someone watching her open mouthed at the opening of the alley. The homeless man stared at her with a comprehension and fear in his eyes then made a run for it back into the shelter. Juliana did not have to think before she reacted; a single bullet in the back of the head and he was dead
She threw his body in the shelter door blocking it with a big metal dumpster. She set fire to the shelter and watched momentarily as it burned. Listening to the screams of the helpless destitute as they burned trapped within their breeze- block prison. “let the flames of hell devour the infidel and they shall be tormented with fire and brimstone in the presence of the holy angles and the presence of the lamb and the smoke of their torment ascendeth up for ever and ever ” she said to herself with a satisfied smile. Then she disappeared off into the night determined to find her zenith for the night
[glow=red,2,300]also [hint] join comic [/hint] [/glow]
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Post by Ceri on Oct 14, 2006 7:59:55 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]Thanks for joining, guys  And Darkshadow, isn't the name Elessar slightly plagiarized?...[/glow] |
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Post by darkshadow on Oct 14, 2006 19:05:41 GMT
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Possibly.
I don't know where from, but i thought i got the idea for that name a little to easily.[/glow]
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Post by Ceri on Oct 15, 2006 13:49:31 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]Lord of the Rings. Aragorn Elessar. I believe it means something along the lines of "Royal Star" or "Star of Royalty", but it's been a while since I looked into Elvish. Anyway, it's from Lord of the Rings.[/glow]
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Post by trip on Oct 16, 2006 21:16:13 GMT
gar i was away for 4 days and nobody thought to enter my slither piece??? gar!!! i even told cez i was going to be away!!!!!!
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Post by Ceri on Oct 17, 2006 15:11:00 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]You could have said something and I would have done. Want to enter it now?
EDIT: I'm gonna put it on the poll but you'll have to post it because I don't know exactly which part you want to post...[/glow]
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And Darkshadow, isn't the name Elessar slightly plagiarized?...[/glow]