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Post by [Six] on Jun 12, 2006 15:45:37 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]SPawn hasnt claimed her in this thread..[/glow]
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 12, 2006 16:09:34 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]still his character, now on with the role play boys (and cez)[/glow]
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Post by Ceri on Jun 12, 2006 16:16:09 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]I'm trained to answering to 'boys'...[/glow]
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 12, 2006 16:22:39 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]oh ok the, well post[/glow]
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Post by Ceri on Jun 12, 2006 20:37:02 GMT
Tracker found himself staring at Leaf in alarm. So it hadn't been Incendury or Hunter...But if this Payne was dead, who was he now to take his revenge on? "You okay?" Leaf waved a hand in front of his vacant face. "Fine," Tracker said quickly. "Who are you, anyway?" she asked. "You just sort of appeared out of nowhere. How do you know Ravenstar?" Tracker hesitated, wondering if he should tell her. He didn't want anyone to know, but it seemed that this Leaf had been an enemy of Ravenstar. His childish mind made a swift decision: he would take his revenge not only on Payne, but anyone who declared themselves an enemy of his sister. Starting, he thought, narrowing his eyes, with Leaf. [glow=red,2,300]Again to note that Tracker doesn't have a clue what he's doing...he's not going much further. But please no one kill him, leave that to me [/glow]
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 11:42:18 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]sure thing.
anyone else want to post on the role play because i think i'm dominating it a little too much[/glow]
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Post by church on Jun 13, 2006 15:28:05 GMT
well i'm not ment to be here for the next foughtnight, didnt ralph tell u??
but ok ill post a little bit 2 tide u over:
Tracker just stood ther frozen for a split second: "err...how do i know dusk ravenstar? well ... she ...ah... and me we err go back a bit. not that i mean i know her that much or we were budds but well she was just the only other hero i knew" smothe a voice in his head though real smoooth mate he thought
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 15:36:54 GMT
but Leaf seemed satisfied with this. "oh ok" there was a few moments of awkward scilence between them but before it could get to profound a bruised and bloddied Incendury barged in the door half leading half dragging a still slightly dazed Hunter Leaf got to her feet in concern "what happened to you guys?"
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Post by [Six] on Jun 13, 2006 15:56:50 GMT
"This powerful pyro attacked me and Hunter when we got to the club, he escaped and now hes blown New Alcatraz to bits." gasped Incendury. "But that would mean the prisoners would have escaped." replied Leaf. "yes exactly looks like theres going to be a whole lot more on our plates."
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 16:07:55 GMT
Core was skulking around in a back alley behind the old town cinema and recreation complex, the base of operations for all of the gang dealings since Oswald Goldcryis [glow=red,2,300](n.b. this is serenas father) [/glow]had taken over the running of the mob from his father almost 30 years away and closed the business. What was taking so long? he was still feeling very proud of himself after this nights work
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 13, 2006 16:17:57 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]sorry for double posting but my other character is such a joke its unreal and i need to introduce this one sometime[/glow]
Name: Juliana Darkstar Age: 27 Gender: Female Superhero Name: Asche Costume: tight black leather jumpsuit and matching boots with stiletto heels and long gloves Looks: long wavy raven hair, ivory fair skin, dark grey eyes Story: her origins are unknown but what is known is that she built herself up in the world of business making herself director of one of the biggest communications firms in the world, Eclipseisoft. (Please note that this would put her in direct competition with Serena Goldcryis in their public lives). Juliana, while appearing mild, is the epitome of evil. Like the most evil people in history she takes her grounding in religion and twisted morals and uses her faith as justification to her actions. She has no fear of condemnation to hell to stem her actions because she believes whole heartedly that she is removing those unworthy for gods green earth. Her ultimate goal is to rule the world and to do this she must remove all who stand in her way. I cannot emphasize enough how evil and powerful she is as a character
Powers: psychic manipulation (similar to sith power in star wars). She can also create powerful psychic fire which destroys almost everything in its path. She has the ability to drain other superheroes of their power and life’s energy in order to gain their abilities
on the other side of town;
Juliana was frustrated. Her modus operandi normally involved a gun, a well planned distraction and a very fast car. If that went wrong she always had he back up plan, unleash a can of flaming psychic whoop-ass on them. The sky above her head sparked like diamonds. The stars were very clear tonight she couldn’t help noticing. The do-gooders were just leaving the homeless shelter. She lurked in the shadows in the alleyway next to the building, totally unseen, ready to pounce One of them came into her alley to smoke. Juliana was indignant, how dare he, what a filthy ungodly habit it was and how Juliana hated it. She had strangled him with invisible hands before he even fully realised she was there. She stepped back to admire her work. Juliana caught sight of someone watching her open mouthed at the opening of the alley. The homeless man stared at her with a comprehension and fear in his eyes then made a run for it back into the shelter. Juliana did not have to think before she reacted; a single bullet in the back of the head and he was dead She threw his body in the shelter door blocking it with a big metal dumpster. She set fire to the shelter and watched momentarily as it burned. Listening to the screams of the helpless destitute as they burned trapped within their breeze- block prison. “let the flames of hell devour the infidel and they shall be tormented with fire and brimstone in the presence of the holy angles and the presence of the lamb and the smoke of their torment ascendeth up for ever and ever ” she said to herself with a satisfied smile. Then she disappeared off into the night determined to find her zenith for the night
[glow=red,2,300]after that little distraction, back to the story....[/glow]
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Post by [Six] on Jun 13, 2006 17:41:55 GMT
Core continued to trudge up and down the alleyway. The door opened at last and Loki called him in. "You disgust me you worm you got seen not only by Hunter and Incendury but by the national news. You insolent little raargh". Loki slapped him round the face and kicked him in the...bollo- testicular region. He fell to the floor and Loki kicked him and drained him with her touch " That'll teach you now get out of my sight."
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Post by Ceri on Jun 14, 2006 14:12:37 GMT
[glow=red,2,3000]Nice deviation there Payne I'm gonna get Tracker out of the way for now, if no one minds...[/glow] "What are we gonna do now?" Leaf asked. "They'll be a whole lot of them on our tail now." "I dunno..." Hunter ran a hand distractedly through his hair. "Well, for a start we should find out where these people are and where they're heading. And where Loki is." As they started discussing this no one noticed Tracker edging to where he had left his rucksack. Making sure no one was watching, he swiftly bent down and pulled a silver revolver out of his bag. He'd stolen the gun and had never used one before, but how hard could it be? Edging around the doorframe he prepared to make a getaway and took aim at Leaf. [glow=red,2,300]Can I shoot someone? Just to injure them? Then I'll go, honest [/glow]
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 14, 2006 14:33:51 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]errr Payne Serena can't drain anyone, just Juliana she would probably just make him hurt a lot with her powers[/glow]
He squeezed the trigger softly so the supers wouldnt hear muffling the click with his hand. he watched in his head in slow motion as for a few miliseconds the bullets floated like feathers through the air towards their target. leaf cried out in pain as the searing kiss of hot lead bit into her shoulder. two clean shots. Tracker turned on his heels and fled
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Post by [Six] on Jun 15, 2006 15:10:10 GMT
Leaf fell to the ground clasping her shoulder ,blood spilling on the floor. Hunter flew after Tracker and Incendury shortly followed leaving Ghost to help the groaning Leaf
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Post by church on Jun 15, 2006 17:10:36 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]thanks payne for correcting cez, when will people learn the big guy with wings fly's!!!![/glow]
oh and for the purppose of movine on let's fastforward to when hunter catches u with the elusive Tracker
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Post by Ceri on Jun 16, 2006 11:27:28 GMT
Tracker burst out of the doors and ran across the road and onto the other side. Over the pounding of his own heavy footsteps he heard the door smash open again as Hunter and Incendury tore after him. Tracker spun around and fired three times again, all of his shots clearing over their heads. Hunter and Incendury sprinted across the road and Tracker ran again. He took a sharp turning off the main road and found himself at a dead end. "What the hell?!" he shouted aloud before he could stop himself. He spun around, the gun still in his hand, just as Hunter and Incendury rounded the corner. He raised the gun and fired again, missing Hunter by far. They began to advance. Tracker pulled the trigger desperately but an empty click returned. Empty. Tracker hurled the gun aside and turned around, helplessly thinking about climbing the wall. It was at least ten feet tall; it was impossible, He turned back, finding Hunter and Incendury barely a few metres away from him.
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Post by [Six] on Jun 17, 2006 19:25:47 GMT
Hunter flew at him pinning him against the wall. "Who the hell are you really....tell me the truth before I beat it out of you." growled Hunter. Incendury forming fireballs in the background " Yah and you better have real good excuse for shooting Leaf." added Incendury
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 17, 2006 20:24:43 GMT
Tracker trembled in Hunters grasp trying to figure out a way to escape and finding none. "well?" prompted Hunter "who are you? who sent you?" Tracker was insulted by this last question "nobody SENT me; I just came" "who are you?" Hunter shook him "answer me"
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Post by Ceri on Jun 17, 2006 21:27:37 GMT
"Who are you?" yelled Hunter. "Who are you and who is Ravenstar to you?" "Christ, let go of me!" shouted Tracker, shoving Hunter so hard that he let go out of shock. "Sian was my sister!" he yelled. "She was my sister and you killed her!" The puzzle fell smack into place and for a second Hunter and Incendury just stared at him. "You stupid bastard," Hunter said simply. "How old are you?" Tracker seemed surprised by the question. "Fifteen." Hunter laughed. "No wonder you're such an idiot." He raised his gun. "Tracker, was it? What's your real name?" Tracker suddenly felt afraid, but compelled all the same. "Freddy Teague." "Then I hope you're prepared to join your sister, Freddy Teague," Hunter said, before plugging four shots into Tracker's head. For a moment the force of the gunshot held him against the wall, then he slumped onto the ground, completely still. A moment passed, then Incendury darted forward and kicked the kid in the stomach. "That's for wasting our time," he shouted. With no further questions Incendury and Hunter ran back up the alley. [glow=red,2,300]Well. He deserved it really. RIP Tracker. I'll probably be back sometime with a new character but good luck for the time being, fellas [/glow]
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Post by [Six] on Jun 18, 2006 11:32:23 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]Hey i think thats really dumb Ceri could you please edit that i dont think hunter would kill a 15 year old just because he was curious about his sisters death did anyone else think that inappropriate?[/glow]
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Post by church on Jun 18, 2006 20:59:07 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]yeh i think killing in a super hero thread with sombodys hero charicter is highly unapropriate, as before i dont run i fly, i dont use guns i use swords and in terms o morals it's superman with batman anger, he gets mad but not on kid's and chicks[/glow]
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Post by Ceri on Jun 19, 2006 7:39:43 GMT
[glow=red,2,3000]Hunter killed Tracker because he shot Leaf but I can change it if you want.
Something along the lines of...[/glow]
"How old are you?" Tracker seemed surprised by the question. "Fifteen." Hunter laughed. "No wonder you're such an idiot." He stepped back to Incendury's side. "What's your real name?" Tracker hesitated. "Freddy Teague." Hunter nodded. "Right. Okay, Freddy Teague, listen to me carefully. Your sister got herself involved with way more than she could handle. By the looks of it you're heading down the same road. She snapped under the pressure but no one killed her. Now get the hell out of here and make sure you don't come to the same fate. Go on," he added, when Tracker didn't move. "Scram." Tracker hesitated, then moved forward, past Hunter and Incendury. He edged down the alley, then turned back to them. "Was...was my sister..." He seemed unsure as to how to phrase the question. "Did she kill anyone?" Hunter paused, surprised. He realised that the kid had been hit with inevitable guilt. He sighed. "Your sister was an idiot," he said. "A fool. But she wasn't a murderer." Relief seemed to flood his face before he checked it. "Okay then." He reached the end of the alley before turning back. "Good luck." Then he scampered away. Incendury and Hunter looked at each other then raced to the end of the alley; there was no sign of him. "Probably better that he's outta the way," Incendury suggested. Hunter nodded. "More and more like his sister," he said. The pair of them hurried back to the appartment.
[glow=red,2,300]Reading back it does seem a little OTT. Is this any better?[/glow]
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Post by [Six] on Jun 19, 2006 15:01:59 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]I think that works nicely[/glow]
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 21, 2006 12:14:06 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]Better Cez[/glow]
Core woke up on a cold hard slimy floor in a pile of trash in a stinking back alley and was supprised to find his powers still there and his body intact. What he'd thought had happened seemed like a terrible dream. What had she really done to him if she hadn't beat him up and drained him, this scared him even more, was he a slave in his mind now, he didn't want to be a host body for some psi'. He looked down at his hands in pain and despair and almost jumped back inin horror when he realised he had a geometric pattern of black eye shapes circles and lines branded into his hands and wrists all the way through skin and bone as if it were burnt into him. He touched his head and felt the burn of the branding on his skin. his hair had disintigrated away into nothingness. He stood up shakily and made his way in an almost drunken stagger to the end of the alley. The ocasional car sped past beyound the pavement by the street was deserted looking around he pulled his hoodie over his head and walked out of the alleyway furtiveley hands in pockets.....*CRASH!*.... some kid running allong the pavement crashed into him at full speed almost making him loose his ballance. the kid fell sprawled out on the street
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 21, 2006 18:09:01 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]things that go bump in the night [/glow]
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Post by Ceri on Jun 22, 2006 14:03:25 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]I was gonna sit out for a while, hence the original killing...[/glow]
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 22, 2006 14:24:16 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]take him to one of my evil characters[/glow]
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Post by Ceri on Jun 23, 2006 10:24:23 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]I was gonna sit out for a while, hence the original killing...[/glow]
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Jun 23, 2006 11:41:14 GMT
[glow=red,2,300]well i got that it's just i have a good idea that involves tracker going to either one of my characters, you can still sit out it just gives a place to hide tracker fr a while and a way to bring him back in again if you ever want to[/glow]
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