Still bored so here's another poem

[Spawn]

Still bored so I might as well write another poem, sorry for writing two in one day...and yeah this one is pretty much about confusion

As I look in the mirror I loath what I see
There's a monster staring back at me
He wears a cloak and big black hat
His eyes glimmer red.

Am I the villain, ruthless and cold?
Or am I the hero, strong and brave?
What fate befalls me?
Please tell me what I am

Is evil always the man in black?
Can you tell what evil is by looking it in the eye?
Is it always monstorous ?
Or is it just another man lost in the night?

Is good always the man in white?
Can you tell what good is by looking it in the eye?
Is it always powerful and brave?
Or is it just another man hopelessly lying on the ground?

Help me see what I am
Help me beleive in good
Help me beleive in evil
Help me see the line in between
Please help me

[The Director]

Very nice, not too sure about the "hero heroic and brave", might be worth trying another adj there, oh and spelling believe...

Still, Very nice, well, not nice but you get the idea

[Phoenix]

very good!! I would rephrase the last verse slightly though cos it sounds a bit like a prayer, or it might be just me....I dunno

[Ceri]

I like the last verse, I think it's supposed to be slightly prayer-like, asking for help from all sources because it's about confusion...

But the poem's great! I like it a lot!

And there's really no limit to the amount of poems you can post...you could post them three times a day if you wanted...so don't worry about posting two in as many days

[church]

yeh well it seames to me that this poem is sorta from a babys point of view of destiny in the sence that nobody can tell what they will be it's kinda more open ended weather the kid is bad or good. to which i can only offer fable as an egsample