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Post by Spawn on Oct 15, 2006 16:14:18 GMT
This is a bit obsecure since its something thats been on my mind, but I thought I'd post it anyway.
Crushed
Pick away at the bones That’s all you do While you were gone I crept into a hole Now your back again.
Take it all away Like I knew you would It didn’t take long, I’m back to being carved up bones Push yourself in, why do you feel you need to engulf everything
You took my skin You took my bones You took my world Now I'm back in shadow
Why don’t you see what you have All you do is take And give nothing in return, you got yourself in How I envy you
I’m a weak impotent little sheep You pushed me out, everybody knew you would Standing over my desires, some sick prison keeper Pain spills in my ear, all I had is now gone.
Weeks filled with nothing Closeness but emptiness all the same You know you got something you don’t deserve You bastard!
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Oct 15, 2006 18:33:57 GMT
awww
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Post by ineedspellcheck on Oct 15, 2006 18:53:14 GMT
yum.....
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Oct 15, 2006 19:24:18 GMT
.....?
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Post by Spawn on Oct 15, 2006 19:46:33 GMT
Just so you know the poems about a man who suffers from a lot of personal issues and he's always destroying everything thats good in his life, but he can't take responsibility for it so he makes up an alter ego and blames that instead.
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Post by x-Lateral_Delusion-x on Oct 15, 2006 20:09:50 GMT
errrm is this about someone...?
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Post by Spawn on Oct 15, 2006 20:12:05 GMT
uh-uh, I didn't explain it very well, it was meant to be about someone blaming everything on its own paranoia...but then I realised that was to close to home and kind of tweaked it a bit...now I'm not to sure what its about. Bugger.
Actually reading through it, it could seem like a someone gained the respect of someone, then lost it because of someone else.
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Post by Ceri on Oct 15, 2006 20:57:59 GMT
It's confusing. I thought it was maybe about some kind of real-life situation. It's a good poem, though...To me it looks like it's a person talking to/about an authoritive figure ruling his life and destroying everything in it...perhaps...
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Post by Ahelos on Nov 3, 2006 11:10:07 GMT
i like it, it has a lot of hidden meaning.
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Post by Vinnie on Apr 10, 2007 10:57:59 GMT
Keyword = hidden
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