Bored so writing stuff

[Spawn]

a!
Dropped into a never ending ocean
Its always flowing, never setting
The waters cold, slaps against my face
Its shit surrounds me

Ah!
Laughing faces, are all I see
Trying to swim, the tied breaks me
I want out, I want to be warm
Let me come home or let me grow again

Ahh!
Stuck in the ocean
All I see is black and grey
I hate this place, when will it stop
I'm cold, alone, why won't it let me be

Ahhh!
Its will never set
One mood after another
Sometime grey
Mostly black
LET ME OUT!
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!

[Ceri]

Interesting...kinda sweet

[Spawn]

Broken World

Tattered ruins
Broken kings
Bloodied heros
All lay at a mans feet

He looks
He stares
He howls
And he cries

Welcome to his brave new world
What a world it is
Human life is obsolete
Bloodied men lay helpless at his feet

Computers run there idiotic programs
Cardbox cut outs program minds
Human life is obsolete
We might as well be dead

He lays in his bed, cold
The man feels old, welcome to his world
A hum of power echoes in his head
A scream of despair rushes through is body

A broken world
Full of card and metal
Hearts and souls have gone elsewhere
He cries for them, they have to be somewhere

This his world
This is our world
Your's and mine
Human life is obsolete.

[Ceri]

Weird poetry. Don't get me wrong, I like it, I think it's really good...it just doesn't make any sense to me

[Spawn]

Probably my crappy spelling, the first one is basically being stuck in a stage of someones life, that they can't move out off.

The second one is about people relying on machines and aurthority figures to tell them how to feel rather then listening to there hearts.

[Ceri]

It's not your crappy spelling, it's me not reading it in depth But that does make it clearer, thanks